Cool!!!

I knew it xD No I didn't knew but glad you like it ;P

xPart 1…
“Bella!” my colleague Viola yelled to me. She was my even my colleague and my best friend. I knew she was real much more real then my old best friend. She used me I hate her. “Yes?” I walked to her she showed at the computer a picture from a band we really liked. “Look! There’s a concert soon!”. “Aaah, let’s go to that one!” I said. Our favorite band was Westlife they came to Italy to give a concert. “Good idea” someone said behind us. We both looked at him. “Ciao Mick!” I smiled. “Hey girls. Not working?” he smiled. “eeh no you see” Viola said. I smiled Viola was the boldest one from us too. I was more shy . “Do you also come with us?” I laughed. “Maybe, maybe I don’t know what Viola thinks from it”. “Do you like Westlife? I’m not in the mood for someone is coming with us who the whole time say I hate this music, what a stupid guys. Than we will kill you” Viola made fists. “We?” I asked. “Yes, we’ll kill Mick together” Viola laughed. “Maybe, I’ll help you” I was staring in the front of me. “MAYBE? You’ve too. Or we don’t go to that concert”. “If you’re first gonna kill me you can’t go to that concert because I didn’t say it was a stupid band and like that.” Mick smiled. “Yeah ok that’s true. We go to that concert and if you say that after the concert we kill you!” Viola said. Mick and Viola were looking at me what I didn’t noticed. “Bella?” Mick said. Viola started to laugh “I think she is thinking about a guy who she likes”. “And who’s the lucky one?”. “Someone” I said. I walked back to my desk and sat down on my chair. Why the hell had I think about him now?. The name of the guy begins with the M. Do you know it I guess so. His name was echoing trough my head. Mick…Mick… “What’s wrong with her?” Mick asked to Viola. “Go to ask herself I don’t know. I think it’s the love”. He walked to my desk and sat down on my desk. “Aah!” I shocked. “Hey man killer”. “I am not! Viola is haha” I laughed. “Yeah you’re right. But she is a nice girl” Mick smiled. Fine he don’t like me. After that I talked a bit with Mick it was time to go home. When I came at home I wasn’t happy anymore. I knew Mick didn’t liked me. Like I said Viola was a man killer but I couldn’t hate her for that and she knew that I like Mick. “C’mon Bella” I talked in myself. “Of course she don’t like Mick. She said is to you” I continued. After that I cooked dinner for myself I took a bath a hot long bath. When I sat in the bath the doorbell was ringing. Should I open the door or not? I did it. I only had a towel around my middle. When I opened the door there stood...

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I bet it's Mick hahahahahahhahahaha!!!! Nice part!!!

O, me loved it! I bet it's Mick as well

i have just read prologue and first part and what can I say....it's interesting I like it and I can't wait for the next part

xPart 2…

“MICK” I yelled. There stood I with only a towel around my body. “What a charming welcome” Mick smiled. I looked weird at him: “Maybe”. I walked into the living room. “Something to drink?” I asked. “Sure, do you’ve tea?”. “Yeah, I’ve” while I grabbed the water boiler. When I putted the water boiler on I said: “You don’t mind if I put some clothes on right?”. Mick smiled “No of course not I’ll make the tea. Don’t make yourself rush for me”. I nodded and closed the door and soon as I could I ran upstairs. When I was in my bedroom I started to jump around in my room. Call me crazy but I was really happy that Mick stood for the door. Only a shame for me I walking downstairs in a towel. I chose some comfortable clothes that I putted on. After that I walked back downstairs. And there sat Mick on the couch with two hot steaming tea’s in front of him. He looked up and smiled when I opened the door. “Hey!” I said. “Ciao girl, welcome back”. I smiled and sat down next to him on the couch. I took a sip of my tea and we just sat there in silence. Suddenly Mick said: “Enjoying of your tea?”. “Yeah, the best tea I ever had at home. And much better tea then at the work”. Mick laughed: “Yeah you’re right”. After the tea we again sat in silence. It was weird to sit next to him even he was my best friend. We had a lot of fun but I don’t know it was different now. Should he like me? “Hey dreamer. Shall we watch a movie?” Mick asked. “Eeh Sure, what do you want to see?”. “Do you’ve Twilight? It’s one of my favorite movies!”. “Really? Mine too. So I’ve that one” I smiled. I putted he DVD in the player and turned the TV on. I sat down again next to Mick. Mick smiled and laid his arm around me and pulled me closer against him. Does he like me? Or am I dreaming?. I laid my head at his chest and smiled. “Do you know I always wanted to know how it feels to be a vampire” I said. “Haha, I don’t know how it feels. But maybe it feels great. You never know” Mick said. “Yeah, you’re right. I’ll never know how it feel”. “Heey, don’t be sad. Maybe ever you will change in a vampire. Or you know someone who is a vampire”. “Maybe, maybe”. I looked at him into his smiling face. Mick pressed a kiss on my for head “For you little vampire haha”. I started to blush. After that we focused at the movie instead of each other. After the movie I had closed my eyes and was sleeping. Mick smiled and lifted me up and carried my upstairs to my bedroom. After he laid my down at my bed he wanted to leave. “Mick?” I asked. “Yeah? Do you want to stay me here?”. “If you want”. “Of course, little vampire”. He walked back to my bed and laid down next to me. I laid my head again at his chest and Mick laid his arms around me. I closed my eyes and fell asleep again.

The next morning…

When I woke up and looked next to me I looked shocked and I said:

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Aww Great part

I think Mick is a cute little vampire hahahahaha!!! MORE

I want more

Soon as possible first I've to dream about how it goes on xD,, yeah I dreamed about this part this night xD

xPart 3…

Well I wanted to say morning to Mick but when I looked next to me he wasn’t in bed anymore. Vague I heard some sounds from plate’s and some forks and knifes. When I walked downstairs I had still my comfortable clothes on from the last evening.

Downstairs…

I saw Mick was cooking a real English breakfast. You know with eggs and bacon. And it’s was one of my favorites. Mick looked up when I came in. “Morning, I thought I let you sleep and make some breakfast at bed”. “Hehe, well I can go back in bed”. “No, I’ll lay the table. Go to sit.” Mick shove a chair from the table and pushed me softly on the chair. “If you say so. Mm smells good!” I smiled. “I’m the best chef you ever get” Mick started to laugh and I laughed with him. I dunno he’s just a sweet and crazy guy don’t you think? Or should he hide something I meant yesterday when I said I wanted to be a vampire he was first a long time silence. Should he didn’t tell me something? “Hey! What are you thinking about?” Mick said. “Oh nothing special” I said. Mick gave me a plate with the eggs and bacon. Then also Mick sat down on the chair. “Don’t you eat anything?” I asked. “No, I’m not hungry. If you want I’ll eat a cracker” Mick smiled. “For me? No you don’t have too” I said and started to eat. Mick was looking at me and I was really enjoying of my breakfast. “And?” Mick asked. “Mick! It’s a perfect dinner!” I smiled. “Thanks Bella you’re the best” he smiled and took a sip of his tea. “Can’t you make often breakfast for me?” I said. “Maybe, or only if you want to hang out with me tonight. Like dancing or go to the cinema”. “Of course! Always you know. And we’re free so we can do other things today if you want”. “Eh, yeah, but first a shower” he smiled. “Eh sure. But I don’t have shampoo for you” I laughed. “Oh, I’ll borrow some from only not if it’s flower flavor” Mick also laughed. “No, it’s banana flavor” I smiled “My favorite” I continued. Mick stood up and wanted to walk upstairs. “Wait!” I said. “What?”. “I wanted to say thanks for the delicious perfect breakfast I ever had” I walked closer to Mick and pressed a kiss on his cheek. He blushed and laid his hand on the side where I gave him a kiss. Then he walked upstairs. I smiled when he had closed the door. He was really the sweetest guy that I ever knew and my best friend. When everything was cleaned and Mick wasn’t back I called Viola and told her everything that Mick was here and the last night. Viola said: “Like I said he doesn’t like me but he really likes you”. After the call and 5 minutes later Mick was back and walked to the kitchen. “Eeh, everything is clean and so fast” Mick said. “Yeah you took a half hour for the shower. I hope you enjoyed of it.” I smiled. “Oh yes I did. And really nice shampoo like you said banana” he laughed. “Haha, nice” I said. “Don’t you want to smell?”. I started to laugh and walked to him Mick was a little bit taller than me so I had to stand at my toes to could smell his hair. Than Mick lifted me up and carried me to the couch and we started to play like we always did...

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Great part

Niicee

wOOO.....pLAY......HAHAHAHAHA
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