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Nightmare ~Part 17

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katjuzka

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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by katjuzka on Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:04 pm

Great part Very Happy


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by Marjolein on Wed Nov 04, 2009 8:20 pm

Thanks Katja (:


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by Heli on Sat Nov 07, 2009 11:15 am

Ah, how beautiful part! flower


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by Marjolein on Sat Nov 07, 2009 1:12 pm

Thanks Heli (:


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by xxolympiaxx on Sat Nov 07, 2009 5:38 pm

awww that was sooo cute! i loved that part Smile


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by Marjolein on Sat Nov 07, 2009 6:42 pm

;D Glad you liked it


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by Marjolein on Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:50 pm

I know it's small.. :\

Part 17

He paced up and down in the room. His blue eyes were locked on a point in the distance. He had heard about the killings. He knew the woman who’d nearly died. He knew the connection between Nicole and Anthony. He knew Alex. He knew the murderer. He shook his head. It just couldn’t be true. His cell mate looked at him. ‘Kowalski, for God’s sake, will you stop pacing up and down?’ Kowalski stopped walking, and looked at the wall. There was no window, no sunlight, just gray concrete walls. All three were decorated by words of hate by previous prisoners. Behind him was the door. It was made of steal, with a square which could be opened. Kowalski sighed, and sat down on the floor. The man looked at him. ‘Hey man, you ok? You ain’t fainting right?’ Kowalski shook his head. ‘No Ramon, I’m not..’ He looked up, into the face of his cell mate. The brown eyes looked worried, and his long hair had a greasy brown color. ‘What’s up? Somethin’ is bothering you, that’s for sure.’ Kowalski sighed. ‘C’mon Jan, it might help if you talk ‘bout it.’ Ramon said. Jan looked up again. ‘You know about the killings, don’t you?’ Ramon nodded, ‘Some guy killed a niece from that detective, Gaudet or somethin’. His partner is dead too.’ Jan nodded. ‘Gaudet is the one who got me in jail, together with Anthony Girard. The one who did this even tried to kill Nicole Éthier, his new partner.. I know who did this Ramon..’ Ramon raised an eyebrow. ‘No, not me, I wouldn’t even think about asking someone to kill those people. If I wanted to get my revenge, to get even, I’d kill Alexander Gaudet himself, not everyone he loves..’ He shook his head. ‘So, who did it then?’ Jan sighed again, and looked at the ceiling. ‘Kazimierz. Kazimierz Kowalski..’ It was quiet for a while. ‘Hold on a sec. Ain’t that your brother? Your brother is killing ‘em?’ Jan nodded. ‘Yes, and I’m afraid he is not done yet..’


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by katjuzka on Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:05 pm

Me wants more Razz


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by Marjolein on Mon Nov 16, 2009 6:19 pm

You've gotta wait Razz


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by katjuzka on Mon Nov 16, 2009 6:21 pm

How long? Razz


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by Marjolein on Mon Nov 16, 2009 6:27 pm

I dunno lol
My spare time is becoming rare.. Neutral


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by katjuzka on Mon Nov 16, 2009 6:51 pm

Okey...maybe i can wait...
do you come to msn now?


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by Marjolein on Mon Nov 16, 2009 9:54 pm

Nope, as you noticed Razz
I won't be on MSN tomorrow as well.. School, fitness, dinner and a presentation at my old secondary school


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by Heli on Tue Nov 17, 2009 10:52 am

Shocked
I want more too! I love you But I know I have to wait... Neutral


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Re: Nightmare ~Part 17

Post by Marjolein on Wed Nov 18, 2009 8:30 am

I'm sorry girls.. I think it'll be Saturday I have time to write.. Neutral
Thanks Heli I love you


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