Chapter 4

I stared outside my window to the pouring rain outside. I was sitting behind my desk on the computer. Facebook was on and a chat screen appeared. Mirela talked to me.

Mirela says:
Hey girl! How are you?

Rosa says:
Hi! I’m pretty fine, bit of a headache. What about you? Did Carlos bring you home safe?

Mirela says:
Oh God, I have a massive headache! I feel like my head is splitting into two! And I feel a bit miserable, but other than that I feel fine. And yes, I was home safe. I immediately went to bed when I got home. Did you end up okay?

Rosa says:
Well, for me it took some longer before I was home. To be honest I’m home since 2 hours.

Mirela says:
Oh my God! Where were you? Did you meet a nice guy?

Rosa says:
I met more. Three in fact. But they weren’t really having nice intentions.

Mirela says:
Okay, you make me worried now. What did they do?

Rosa says:
Well, one touched me, I threw him on the ground, then someone else grabbed my throat but I kicked him in his stomach, but when I wanted to kick his balls, I got hit on my head and so I fell down. Then I tackled the guy who hit me and pushed my heel in his leg. Then when I wanted to get up, I got hit on my head with a baseball bat and that’s when I got unconscious.

Mirela says:
WHAT?! Are you sure you didn’t dream it?! OMG!

Rosa says:
No, I didn’t dream it! But I woke up in a house.

Mirela says:


Rosa says:
But it wasn’t the house of the men! A guy found me and took me to his home and let me rest there.

Mirela says:
Really? Oh my… you are so lucky! Did you wake up that late then?

Rosa says:
Erm no… we talked a lot.. almost whole afternoon..

Mirela says:
Oooooh! You are so sneaky! xD So tell me… was he cute?

Rosa says:
To be honest.. yes, I really like him

Mirela says:
Do you have his number?!

Rosa says:
No.. didn’t think of that

Mirela says:
Awwww… you two should meet again! It seems like you can get along very well with him!

Rosa says:
Yeah, I do.. well.. I know where he lives..

Mirela says:
OMG!!!! ROSA!!! THAT’S PERFECT!! You should visit him tomorrow!!!

Rosa says:
Maybe.. maybe not..

Mirela says:
Oh come on! Apparently he is interested in you! And you are interested in him! So grab this chance! Rosa! You have been single for YEARS! You haven’t been flirting with any guy since Ricardo!

Rosa says:
Please, don’t mention him again! And I know I have been single for a long time but it doesn’t bother me that much..

Mirela says:
Rosa, let’s get serious. You have been single for 3 years. 3 YEARS! And you are effing 23 years old! 23!!!!!! You are young, you are free and you need a man! And it seems this man, who saved you from those guys, could be the perfect man for you! What’s his name?

Rosa says:
His name is Mikel..

Mirela says:
Mikel… hmmm…

Rosa says:
What?

Mirela says:
Nothing ^^ Just thinking.. But anyway, promise me you will visit his house tomorrow!

Rosa says:
I don’t even know if he’s home nor if he has time..

Mirela says:
But you HAVE to see him tomorrow! There isn’t much time left!!!

Rosa says:
Please, don’t exaggerate..

Mirela says:
I’M NOT EXAGGERATING! This is a serious case! You, young lady, need to get laid!

Rosa says:
MIRELA!!!!!!!!!!

Mirela says:
I’m just saying the truth! I simply know he will be perfect for you, and if you keep on watching men via your bloody computer you will end up as a lonely old lady with a crazy imagination!

Rosa says:
I gotta go..

Mirela says:
Promise you will visit him!

Rosa says:
…

Mirela says:
Promise!!

Rosa says:
I promise.. really, I promise

Mirela says:
Good girl! I’m gonna go to bed… Gonna meet up with Jason again <3 Gosh, I really like him!

Rosa says:
Haha! xD Have fun sweetie

Mirela says:
And you too!! I will call you tomorrow to check if you are at Mikel’s place already! If you’re not…. You will regret..

Rosa says:
Yeah yeah… I will be there.. Byeee!

Mirela says:
Love ya!

Mirela is offline and has left the conversation.


I sighed and logged off at Facebook and shut my computer down. I put my pyjamas on and went to the bathroom to brush my teeth. While I looked in the mirror I watched myself. I couldn’t understand how a God like Mikel could like such a boring and normal person like me. I spit out the fluid toothpaste in the sink and washed my mouth.
Then I washed my face and put my hair in one braid. I switched the light off and crawled into bed. I heard the rain falling on my window. It made me feel calm although it didn’t make me sleepy. I thought about so many things. Maybe I should visit him. Probably he wasn’t even home then. But I could always try.
I closed my eyes and as I slowly drifted off to sleep my last thought was Mikel, the man of my dreams.

I can't think of a suitable chapter song for this one!

Mirela says:
I’M NOT EXAGGERATING! This is a serious case! You, young lady, need to get laid!

Haha xD

Nice chappie, liked it

So nice part

love it!!!
i want more nowwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Today I have to tidy my room (and it's a huge mess so..) and tomorrow is my birthday so I won't be able to write a new chapter until Friday.

Sorry girls.

xDD its ok, have a wonderful day tomorrow!! x x x

I quickly wrote a part before the big final of Eurovision starts
I hope you like it.

Chapter 5

That night I dreamt really bad. I was standing in a small, grey room. It was all empty, there wasn’t even a window or a door. I looked around me and saw nothing but grey. Then I saw smoke coming from the corners, spreading into the room. When it reached me, I smelled it. I stepped away because it smelled bad. It hurted my eyes and my throat. Then suddenly I felt my whole body glowing, it was horrible! I lifted my hands up and saw them on fire. When I woke up I yelled. I sat right up in bed and opened up my eyes. I scared the hell out of me when I saw my room. The door was on fire, my desk was on fire and the curtains next to the window were burning as well. I tried to scream but I was too shocked to do anything. I just stared at the fire, dancing around my furniture, dancing in my room. Then I closed my eyes and coughed. Both my eyes and throat hurted. I suddenly remembered the nightmare I just had. ‘Shit,’ I whispered with a sore throat as I got up and tried to find a way out. My door was covered in fire, just like my window. My heart pounded into my chest, I started to sweat, not only because of the heat but also because I panicked. I didn’t know what to do. If I’d open the door really quick there would probably more fire behind it. I could jump through the window but I was too scared to break my neck when I would drop to the ground. I tried to scream for help but noone was there. Did someone even notice my house was on fire? I sat back on my bed and cried. I would die in a crowd of fire. It felt as if my lungs couldn’t make me breathe. It felt as if they were filled with smoke. The last thing I saw was a blurry shadow flashing through the room. That’s when I felt lightheaded and I dropped down unconscious on my bed.

‘Rosa? Rosa, are you there? Rosa!’ I heard a voice saying worried. It sounded far away. I tried to open my eyes but they felt so heavy. Apparently the person who called me noticed I was awake. ‘Can you hear me?’ the person said. I opened my mouth but only a hoarse moan came out. ‘Mirela, she woke up!’ the person said. I didn’t even notice my eyes were open when I heard the mention of her name. I saw a woman looking worried at me. Then I saw a girl walking to me. ‘Oh my God, Rosa! How are you feeling?’ Mirela asked, her eyes filled with worry. I tried to speak but my voice simply refused. Probably I just needed to give my voice a rest. I just nodded and managed to pull up a small smile. Both Mirela and the woman smiled. That’s when I recognized the woman. It was my mother. ‘Oh dear, I was worried to death! I still am! I thought you would die! But this young man saved your life,’ my mom said and smiled while she caressed my cheek with her thumb. My face looked puzzled. They understood I wanted to know who. ‘He is here in the hospital. I’ll get him,’ she smiled and pressed a kiss on my forehead as she got up and walked out. ‘I thought I would lose my bestie,’ Mirela said with a sad voice. She looked down at the ground to hide her face. Did she just wipe a tear away? ‘By the way, the guy who saved you is totally hot,’ she smiled when she turned her face back to me. Right after she said that the door opened and my jaws dropped down in astonishment. ‘Hi Rosa, remember me?’ Mikel smiled as he walked inside followed by my mom.

Chapter song: Craig David - Hot Stuff hahahah
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7ddJLllHtVg

Tatatataaaa! Superman! Or.. Mikel xD Anyway, great part (:

Great part

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Chapter 6

I tried to speak but it was useless. He came closer and sat on a chair next to me. It only took one look at both Mikel and me for Mirela to understand that the guy who saved me was Mikel. ‘OH!’ she yelled with a hand in front of her mouth. ‘Erm, Sandra? Can we talk?’ she said to my mom. My mom nodded as she followed Mirela out of the room. I looked confused at the closed door. ‘Ok?’ Mikel said as he watched them leaving. ‘So, you’re really attractive for dangerous things,’ he smiled as he turned to me. I couldn’t say anything. This was too much coincidence. He couldn’t save me twice! I mean, what the hell?
I just shrugged and turned my eyes away from his gorgeous face. ‘What’s the matter?’ he asked. I opened up my mouth, pointed with my index finger into it and shrugged again. He laughed out loud. I put up a bored face, that wasn’t funny at all. ‘Oh, you,’ he smiled a crooked smile. At this moment I was happy I lost my voice because I would have gasped so loud, it would be embarrassing as hell. ‘So, I can say anything without hearing you disagreeing with me,’ he said. He seemed to like the idea a lot. I rolled my eyes, sighed deeply and turned once again my head away from him. How could I communicate with anybody now? This sucks, this REALLY sucks. ‘Isn’t the weather just great? So sunny, no clouds and veeeeery warm,’ he teased me. I still didn’t look at him and just ignored him. What an annoying man. ‘You can’t ignore me forever,’ he smiled, his arms crossed. I closed my eyes and pretended like I wanted to sleep. I felt his look burning on me. Maybe he should get some medication too. ‘You’re not sleeping,’ he said. He was really getting on my nerves now. I still didn’t respond though. ‘Oh, you can ignore me if you want. I’m not going anywhere.’
Damn him!
‘I already am,’ he said. My eyes shot wide open and I looked at him in shock. My mouth opened but I couldn’t say anything. He looked like I just busted him on a very deep secret. I saw his face turning even paler than he already was. Then I had an idea. I searched for a piece of paper and a pencil. There was a pencil on the cupboard next to me, but no paper. I imitated I was writing with the pencil on an invicible piece of paper. He got the message and went out of the room. Not even three seconds later he came back with a whole pack of paper. I looked surprised at him. How could he be so fast?
He gave one piece to me together with a magazine so I had something to put the paper on. I started writing...
How did you know that? I wasn’t saying it out loud. Or can you read minds or something?

By the way...

You’re an annoying brat.

I gave the piece of paper to him. He read it and frowned deep. ‘You did say it out loud,’ he said, still frowning. I grabbed the paper out of his hands and continued writing.
No, I didn’t! I know for sure that I was just thinking that! What did I say then?
I gave it back to him again. He read it in one second and looked at me. His frown had disappeared. ‘Damn him,’ he said. My jaws dropped down. I grabbed the paper again.
What the hell?! You can read minds?! I didn’t say that out loud! I know for 100% that I didn’t say that out loud! So, explain to me what you were doing. Or... what you CAN do.
He read it again. ‘That’s none of your business,’ he said as he got up and approached the door. I tried to scream “wait” but nothing came out. I wrote down on another piece of paper. I quickly folded it into an airplane and threw it his way. It landed right in front of his feet. Hah! I am a champion in folding and throwing paper planes. ‘I am better,’ he smiled as he picked up the paper plane from the ground. My jaws, once again, dropped down. I was SO not saying that out loud! ‘Goodbye Rosa,’ he said as he walked out of the room and closed the door. I laid there in astonishment. Mikel had a lot to explain when I would be able to talk again.

MPOV (Mikel’s Point Of View)
Okay Mikel, you are doing it all the wrong way!
Mikel had a lot to explain when I would be able to talk again.
Rosa. Damnit! She will haunt me till I will explain my gift to her! She will think I’m crazy. But I have this gift for a reason. I passed by a mirror and looked at myself. Was she really into this? This... monster?
I wonder when that little kid will come back. I hope he didn’t attack the human yet. ... HAHA! No way! He knows it will cause a lot of chaos. He’s not even able to attack little girls. He’s such a pussy.
Basty. Wait, he’s here?
I walked quickly past the many people who were walking through the hallway. They didn’t even notice me, I was way too fast for that. I came into the waiting room and saw Basty sitting with a magazine on his lap. ‘So, big bro, who’s a pussy?’ I smiled as I approached him. ‘Ah damn you and your evil mind!’ he said. He scared a woman when he threw the magazine in a rush back on the table next to him. He smiled friendly to the woman, who seemed to melt like ice-cream in the sun. I rolled my eyes as I saw other girls in the room staring at both Basty and me. We were gorgeous because of the creatures we were. But they didn’t know that. If they knew, this whole hospital would be full of chaos and murder. We would make a massacre.
‘So, how is she?’ Basty asked. ‘She is fine, she lost her voice because of the smoke and stuff. But she’ll be ok. C’mon let’s go home. Let’s see if Maria prepared our next hunt already,’ I said and I saw Basty’s eyes sparkle at the mention of “hunt”. He was hungry, I could see that. He put a lot of effort to not attack any human. But he learned to control his hunger. I could only see it in his eyes. And to be frank, I was hungry as hell too. Especially after being around Rosa for a long time. Her scent... it’s hard to resist. It’s worse than other humans.
We step into the car and Basty gave full gass as we drove away from the hospital. Rosa’s scent slowly disappeared as we drove farther from the hospital. I could breath again.

Last edited by Imke ^^ on Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:48 pm; edited 1 time in total

I love this story

Hahah xD I sound stupid giggling while no one hears me xD

Loved it

love it!
first because it has to do with Mikel
and second because it has to do with Twilight!!
yeah babe! xD