I guess so? Because Mar is the only one who's reading it...

Ish ok Hen (:
I still got to read some extras *wiggles eyebrows*

Girls, may I say something? Without meaning to insult anybody, I just... can't understand why you cancel stories because only 1 or two people read it. In my opinion, it doesn't matter how many people read the story because... if it was a book, and you published it, and it didn't sell many copies... it doesn't matter, because your story may be awesome, but people haven't read it, and haven't discovered the true thing about it So... it doesn't matter if 1 or 2 or 100 people read your story... I had a story who was read only by 2 people, but I continued posting it... because I had written it with so many emotions that I couldn't just leave it in my PC without even 1 person reading it and telling me his opinion...!!!I just think it's a waste of time... and a TOTAl waste of good stories!!!


Sorry.... it just came out... so... I'll put this story with the others canceled?

Well, I've the feeling this story suck atm but I don't care.. If you badly want that I write it further fine!

I didn't say it to push you anything Hen, if you want to cancel it, then it's ok by me, it's your story after all

Ok... ow I'm reading it too!!! So... it sounds pretty amazing Hen, I like it, even if it's with Dima Bilan whom I don't like very much
Great story, and my mom is from Czech Republic, and I've been to Prague for a couple of times so be careful what you'll right next hahahahaha (just kidding)

Thanks Dimitra! and btw I love the new layout!

I'm glad you liked it Hen

Haha no problem! :D

and YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i finally read it
Hen that's a very good story, you have a talent so go on

Thanks Oly .

I'll try to post part 8 today but I don't promise..

..* Part 8: Praha in the evening

Soon Dima and I were walking again in Praha. “Well, which fancy restaurant do you choose?” Dima asked. “Ehm.. That one!” I pointed at the McDonalds. “What? That’s not fancy?” “But?” I pouted my under lip like a little child. Dima started to laugh. “Haha, crazy girl. Alright but tomorrow a fancy one!” “Yeah! You’re a great guy” I smiled and hugged him “Hmm” Dima mumbled. I looked at him and Dima looked back.: “Shall we go?”. I nodded together we walked into the McDonalds. Dima ordered everything while I was searching for a table. Soon I found one and sat down beside the table. At the same moment were three guys coming in the way of my table. One of the guys said something in Czech to me. I looked weird at them because I didn’t get any word of it. “What the hack are you saying?” I asked. The guys looked at me. But then one of them was hanging over the table. I saw his face coming closer and closer. He was not far from my lips ready to touch my lips. I got a bit scared but then on the right moment I heard someone yelling: “HEY!” Dima yelled. The first one looked up the one who was trying to kiss me. “Don’t dare to touch my girlfriend!” Dima looked angry. But the guys were gone. He putted the tray with food down on the table and sat down in front of me on the other chair. He looked at me: “Are you ok?”. “Yes, thank you” I said and putted a few fries in my mouth. It’s no problem” he smiled and started to eat. After dinner we were just walking around in Praha. We didn’t say anything to each other. I was looking around me. It was such a beautiful city. Dima’s arm bumped softly against my arm. If felt how he took my hand. I liked the feeling he gave me. I looked at him. Dima looked back “Do you mind it?”. “No, of course not. Actually I like it” I said. Dima smiled. I looked back in front of me to hide my red cheeks. Next to me I saw the famous cannel from Praha. Soon we arrived at the bridge. I was standing in front of the water and looked down. Dima came standing behind me and laid his arms around me. “Beautiful is it here not?” I asked. “Hmm, yes”. He laid his head on my shoulder and looked also at the water. He pulled me closer against himself. He sighed. “What’s wrong?” I asked. “Nothing. I’m just happy” “About what?” “That I’ve met you. Why didn’t we met earlier?” “Because you had something with Lena and you didn’t looked at other girls and because you lived in Russia you busy with your music and I lived in the Netherlands. I was busy with being your fan. Do you know my room is full with posters of you and now we’re standing in the front of the water together it just the weirdest thing ever” I said. “Wow” Dima said. I laughed: “I’m sorry to saddle you up with my stupid confessions” “No, it’s ok. I like it to hear your stupid confessions”. “Hmm nice” I said and turned in front of him. I looked at him and kissed him on his cheek. After that we had talked for a while we went back to the hotel. Walking hand in hand.

We walked slowly upstairs still hand in hand. It was like we both didn’t let our hands go. While we still were holding each others hands. Soon we were standing in the front of our hotelroom. I let my hand go of Dima’s and started to search for the key. Soon I had found it and unlocked the door. “For one time not ladies first. But nice guys” I smiled. “Thank you lady” Dima smiled back and went inside. I followed him and closed the door behind me. He sat down on a chair, and began to take his shoes off. I fell down on the bed, and sighed. Dima looked up. "Everything all right?'' He asked me. I smiled and nodded. "Just a bit tired.. I'm going to take a shower.." I got up, searched for a towel, shampoo and shower gel, and walked into the bathroom. I locked the door, and turned the shower on. The steam filled the tiny excuse for a bathroom, and I got rid of my clothes. Quickly, I got under the shower. The water felt nice on my skin. I smiled, and began to wash my hair. I still couldn't believe I was actually traveling with one of the best artists ever. Really, he was amazing. It was just plain absurd, perhaps I'd gone crazy. No, Dima Bilan was there, sitting on a chair, in a hotel room. the hotel room we shared together. the third room we were sharing. Was I falling in love with him? I thought about it for a second. I did like him, a lot. He was kind, and easy to talk with. We had a lot of fun being together, but love him? I don't know. I sighed, and rubbed the shampoo out of my eyes. ''Ouch, God darn it, that stings.." I muttered. I took my shower gel. When I was done I wrapped a towel around myself and went back to our room.

Dima was sitting on the bed, his back against the wall, reading a book. He looked up when he heard the door. "Was the shower nice?" He smiled crookedly. My heart began to beat faster. ''Jeeze Hen, get real.. He's what? 24? And how old are you? That's right, 17, seven-teen..'' A little voice in my head said. I nodded. "The water was nice, wet and hot.'' He chuckled. ''Good to know.'' I got some clothes, and walked back into the bathroom. Quickly I got dressed, and brushed my hair. I walked back out. Dima was sitting right in my line of sight, being perfect and gorgeous. I sighed quietly, and sat down next to him. He pulled me closer, and I had to lay my head against his shoulder. He kissed me on the top of my head. "your hair smells nice.." He smiled against my head. I closed my eyes. "Thanks.. You smell nice too." I smiled and laid closer to him. He laid his arm around me, and continued reading. I looked up to his gorgeous face. "Nice book?" He nodded. "Mm-hm..". "Good." I smiled. He smiled back. Soon I felt how my eyelids tried to fall shut. For a while I fought back, but soon enough my tiredness won, and I fell asleep, in Dima's arms. Dima looked next to him. She was asleep. Her face was serene, and cute. Her hair was still damp from the shower, and a bit fuzzy. He smiled and kissed her on her forehead. "Sleep well stranger.." He laid his book away, and laid down as well. Dima switched the lights off, and closed his eyes. He pulled Hen closer against his chest, and laid his arms around her. Soon he was sleeping as well.

Naww...

't blijft raar om te lezen wak zelf schrijf haha

Haha dat kan ik me voorstellen ;P

Oh, sexy dude
Liking your ava

Maar ik vind het leuk om te kunnen helpen haha ;D