Haha

No she's the man is something else.. In this one it's about an earring xD

Amazing parts! Can't wait for more

Yay 2nd page!

I just finished writing this part, I hope you like it.

Part 5

I walked down the stairs slowly, observing the house. It was pretty big but smaller than mine. I opened the first door I saw and I noticed I was immediately right. I was in the dinner room, a huge dinner table took most of the space in the room. The table was already set and the same woman, who just shouted at me a few minutes ago, walked inside. ‘Finally! Now sit down and quickly finish your breakfast,’ she said and shove a chair backwards and gestured I had to sit down. I said nothing and just sat down. The woman looked surprised at me while she put two slices of bread on a plate and a glass of orange juice down in front of me. ‘So, did you sleep well?’ she asked after she sat down in front of me. ‘Erm... pretty good,’ I said with my mouth full of bread. ‘Don’t talk while you eat, Melody,’ she said sternly. ‘Ok, sorry,’ I apologised. She gave me a weird look. ‘Are you feeling alright today, honey?’ she said almost in a whisper. ‘Yeah, sure,’ I answered. Sure! I’m feeling so good that I decided to swap body with some strange girl and her weird mother who decides how I have to eat my freaking breakfast! ‘Are you sure you slept well?’ she asked. ‘Yes,’ I said with a tad annoyance in my voice. She smiled suddenly, got up and walked to the hallstand. She grabbed her coat and put it on. ‘I’ll take you to school today,’ she smiled. Okay, this woman has random moods changing every minute. I wondered when she would suddenly get really aggressive and attack me for no reason. This girl must have a hard time having a mother like her. I nodded, got up and walked to the hallstand. I stared at it, speculating which coat could be mine... or the girl’s. There was a brown jacket, a white trench coat, a pink coat and a black male coat. I was urging to grab the black one, since I still feel male, but I took the pink one instead since the bedroom is pink as well. ‘Dear, that’s your sister’s coat,’ the woman said. ‘Oh,’ I just said and grabbed the brown one. It looked pretty stylish. ‘That’s mine,’ the woman muttered. I felt my cheeks glowing as I took the white one. Before we walked out of the door she gave me one suspicious look. We step into a dark red car and the woman put the keys in the lock of the car. The motor started roaring and we drove out from the entranceway. I was very quiet while the woman kept on talking. I just pretended that I listened to her but I was just thinking deep. I was trying to think about ways of how I swapped body with a girl. What was my own body doing now? Is that girl now in my body too? Suddenly my body stiffened and my eyes widened. Oh God! She doesn’t know anything about celeb life! She doesn’t know our dance routines, maybe not even all lyrics. What will the other guys think?! She will probably act like a girl... so it’s my body who acts like a girl. No no no no NO! What if she wants to shop with one of them?! I, Mikel, hate shopping! They will think I’m crazy or... she’s crazy or... no, they don’t know it’s actually her in my body so they will think I’m crazy! Maybe that explains why the woman is looking weird, surprised or happy at me every minute. Maybe she’s used to a different reaction of her daughter. Do I have to call her “mom” now too?! Then I realized where I was going to. I was going to school. SCHOOL! S-C-H-O-O-L. The I-have-homework-school. The I-have-to-study-school. I don’t even know what subjects I have! It’s been such a long time since I’ve been to school! I slightly started to panick. What are the girl’s friends? Does she even have friends? Is she popular or is she being bullied? According to the looks of this girl she must be a bit popular. Or at least have friends. So many changes I have to go through, so many things I have to face. But... what about boys?! Maybe she has a boyfriend! Where she kisses with and maybe even... OK MIKEL STOP IT! You’re NOT going to kiss a guy! Well, in fact you’re in a girl’s body so people won’t look weird when you kiss a guy. But... it’s weird for me! I mean, come on! I’m the biggest flirt of the group but I do NOT flirt with guys! But... I can’t go flirting with girls either since I don’t think this girl likes girls. According to the pictures of us in her bedroom she must be drooling all over us. Somehow I wondered who her favourite member would be since all fans have a favourite member. I hope it wouldn’t be me. If it would be me... well, I don’t want to think about that.
‘We’re there!’ my new mom said and stopped the car in front of my new school. Oh. My. God, I could only think to myself when I saw the huge building and thousands of people walking on the terrain. Some sitting on the grass chatting with eachother and others were walking into the building. Wait... this isn’t just a school. This is university! I sighed relieved. At least the people here must be grown ups, just like moi. A small smile appeared on my face. My new mom looked weird at me again. I rolled my eyes and opened the door. I grabbed my bag and step out. ‘Have fun!’ she shouted after me before I shut the door. I slowly walked to the grassfield while observing everything. ‘Mel!’ I heard behind me. I turned and saw a guy walking up to me. Oh no! She DOES have a boyfriend! The guy smiled widely and stood still in front of me. ‘Do you have any plans for tonight?’ he asked still with the same wide smile. I didn’t know if this girl had made plans for tonight already. ‘I don’t know,’ I decided to say. ‘Just go out with me,’ he said and step closer to me. I took a step backwards. He suddenly grabbed my arms and pushed me closer. ‘You can’t avoid me forever. I will have you some day,’ he whispered. ‘Let her go, Brian!’ I heard from behind the guy and he got pushed aside. He struggled and fell. ‘She doesn’t want you!’ she said pissed. Wait, this Brian isn’t my boyfriend? ... YAY!
I sighed relieved and apparently the girl who had pushed Brian away noticed I was relieved. ‘Was he bothering you again?’ she asked. ‘Erm... yes,’ I said. ‘You stay away from her! Mel, why you didn’t push him away?’ she asked. ‘Because she starts to like me,’ Brian smiled. ‘Shut up, cunt!’ she snapped, grabbed my wrist and pulled me away. Apparently the girl and her friend didn’t like him. And he’s flirting with the girl for a long time. Great, I have my first admirer. Suddenly a bell echoed loudly over the terrain. ‘Let’s go,’ the girl sighed and we walked to the building. How am I going to survive this? I'm screwed.

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Ahaha hahaha! *giggles* Amazing xD

This really help me to win my bad mood...Cheers me up
So funny part

wow!! these parts are soooo funny! i agree with katjuzka, you describe everything so well with a great sense of humor! well done!

btw, i would do the same thing if i was in Mel's sittuation, but actually i'm worst! i would faint without even thinking!!

Part 6

I looked at myself in the mirror. The combination of clothes was perfect! I was happy I was born with a sense for fashion. And boy, I was happy that Mikel had the same too! I walked into my own personal bathroom and saw a pot with gel standing on a shelf right above the sink. I had to fix my older brother’s hair a few times and I saw Mikel’s haircut often so I knew how he fixed his hair. I grabbed some gel out of the pot and messed some with the hair. It only took a few seconds. Perfect, sometimes it does help to have a small obsession for this guy. I smiled pleased at the result. Right after that my smile disappeared because I almost fell down. No more smiling in the mirror. I still had a weakness for his gorgeous Golgate-white smile. I quickly walked out before serious accidents would happen. I opened the door to the corridor and walked downstairs and ended up in the hallway. Holy Lord, this place is huge! And so bright! The floor was blinking, it was so clean that you could see your reflection. In front of me was a big white door with on each side a big window covered with white curtains. It also smelled very fresh in here. Would they have their own home help? I guess so, since I don’t see the guys cleaning the whole place. ‘Mikel! Come! Breakfast is ready! Basty, our brilliant cook, made it!’ Ony said standing in the doorway. Okay Melody, don’t drool, it’s just Ony. It’s just Ony!
I nodded and followed him slowly into the kitchen. The kitchen was beautiful. No, it was beyond beautiful. It reminded me a bit of the Cullen’s kitchen in the movie Twilight. But oh my God, these guys have taste! It must have taken such a long time to have it built like this. The others soon noticed I was staring around amazed. ‘Is there something wrong?’ Basty asked. ‘You didn’t see a spider on the ceiling, did you?’ Javi frowned. ‘Erm.. no?’ I said confused. ‘Then why are you staring at our kitchen like it’s the first time you see it?’ Javi replied. I just shrugged and sat on Basty’s opposite next to Ony. ‘Well, let’s start! I’m hungry!’ Javi smiled. All three suddenly grabbed everything they could get before I even had the chance to reach out my hand to take the pack of orange juice. Finally they had what they wanted and started to eat like they hadn’t in months. As the last one I took the pack of orange juice and poored it in my glass. Then I calmly grabbed a piece of bread. They all three stared at me. ‘What now?’ I said slightly annoyed. ‘You didn’t join us,’ Javi said. ‘So? I’m not a pig,’ I said and took a bite. ‘Are you saying we are pigs?’ Basty said squinting his eyes. ‘No. I just said I’m not a pig,’ I said without looking at him. ‘But you mean to say that we are,’ Ony replied. ‘Look, I didn’t choose to be in this life!’ I said pissed and walked away. When I passed by the doorway to the hallway I pressed myself against the wall. Shit! Why did I say that?! They’d probably think Mikel isn’t satisfied with his life at the moment. Or they didn’t understand it at all.
I took a deep breath and walked back inside. ‘So what are the plans for today?’ I asked like nothing had happened. ‘Rehearsal,’ Ony muttered with his mouth full of food. I stood still like frozen. Rehearsal?

It's pretty small. I hope you don't mind.

It was perfect and so funny

amazing! continue, i want to know what'll happen at the rehearsal!

Haha xD

'mazing

Heya!

I just wanted to let you know that I have no idea when I will post a new part. I don't have any ideas atm but I'm trying very hard to come with new ideas!
I do have some other ideas but I don't know how to have them written, if you know what I mean.

So I will pause this story for a little while.

Take your time
I think that we have time to wait because this is so good story

ok no problem !!