World Forsaken, Words Forbidden - Part 7

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Heli- Number of posts: 107
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Hahah, thanks girls! 
But of course there will happen something! It would be boooring if there didn't happen anything.

But of course there will happen something! It would be boooring if there didn't happen anything.

Dimitra- Administrator

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Something WILL obviously happen and I'm looking forward to knowing what this something is xD
Nice part Heli
Nice part Heli
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Heli- Number of posts: 107
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3. Path
I took my bow and spear with me and walked out from our city. All the houses were built up together there. Father’s palace was in the centre of it and other’s houses were around it. There were streets, bridges, ladders which connected all buildings to each others. Many elves were greeting me when I walked through the city. Many men had already left to hunt but many were still leaving. I sighed for relief when I finally got to the forest. I could finally be alone for a while. Nobody was here criticizing what I was doing and how, anybody wasn’t teaching me how to do everything. And the best of all, Inaila wasn’t here talking endlessly how I should be careful with my weapons. Sacred peace finally.
Usually my father or his advisors would have taught some habits of our land for me now. How everything would be solved, what kind of other elf kings were and so on. They were preparing me to be the head of our family someday. But today everybody was hunting, even dad and his advisors so there were no lectures during the all week.
I enjoyed the peace of the nature. I was walking carefully around the forest trying to catch even some game. I saw little glimpses of other elves who were hunting too. But it was unnecessary to talk with others, we had our own ways to show if we needed help. And it was quicker to go through the lands if we were moving alone. We all had a little horn which we used if we needed help. It was a little hard to take a huge bear back to city alone for instance. I had a sack with me where I could put all little game I got like birds and rabbits…
I didn’t see much of that day. I saw some traces of elks but they were already old ones. Finally I could surprise two black grouses which I shot down from the tree with two arrows. At least I didn’t need to go back home with empty hands. But suddenly I saw something I shouldn’t see there. Two women, two humans actually. I was amazed nobody else had seen them before. They started to be soon a bit too close my city. I hadn’t seen any human so close the city before. It was much common thing if you went closer to the boundary of our worlds. I had done that sometimes and I was surprised how many people there were walking in our forest. But many of them walked finally back home without knowing they had entered in totally different world.
Those two women didn’t notice me. How could they? They were blind and deaf from our point of view. I went down behind a big stone and followed them. They were still walking towards our city. Finally they would bump up with out safety magic wall and it would force them to go around our city. But it wasn’t wise to let them go that far. I walked silently past them and then I was walking in front of them. They were walking and talking so loudly that my ears hurt because of that. I muttered some words and waved my hands a bit. Now everything should be fine.
- Don’t you think we have walked too far already? I could clearly hear the other woman asking.
- I dunno. But this place doesn’t seem any familiar to me. Maybe we really should turn around back home, the other one said.
- I’ll agree, the first one who spoke said.
I followed them for a while so they really would go back. They were walking without resisting along the path I had made for them. My little magic would force them to stay in that path until they would be in their own world again. Those were two good examples what we could do with our magic skills. Our magic was something in the air which affected other’s minds. We could use air, water, fire and soil for our magic tricks.
Finally I left back home with my game. I think I should mention about this to father. It was special that people was walking so close our city.
I was walking back home from the forest with my friend. We had been pretty deep in the forest because it took so long to get back to town. I don’t know but maybe we were a bit lost too. Suddenly I just realized I didn’t know at all where I was and I felt I had to turn around and walk along the path back. I did how I felt and soon I was back in my town. My friend and I separated in a crossroads near my house. Everything felt like a dream, I wasn’t sure if it was really happening. It felt like I had walked through the fog actually.
When I opened the gate to my garden, the wind started to blow suddenly really hard. It took some orange leaves with it and whirled them around my yard. The path to my house was made with different size of rocks. For a moment I could see words “you’re welcome” made by the leaves on the rocks. But suddenly it was gone. I shook my head and woke up. Like I had been in some kind of dream.
Weird…
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Marjolein- Number of posts: 1125
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Oeh.. The human has a weird feeling..
Great part
Great part
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4. Life burns!
Inaila was really relieved when she saw me coming. She didn’t say it directly but I could see it on her face. I gave my game to one of the servants who promised to take it to our cooker straight away.
- Has dad already come? I need to talk with him, I said to Inaila.
She looked at me worried. – He’s already at home. I guess he’s in his room now, she answered. – Why? Has something happened?
- Nothing serious, I guess. I just want to tell dad first, I revealed.
- If it wasn’t serious, you wouldn’t bother dad with it, Inaila answered. – So something happened. What?
- I’ll talk about this with dad at first. I don’t want to worry you in vain, I said.
- Atha’n! I’m not a little child! You can tell me what it’s about! Inaila got mad.
- Dad decides if it’s so important that others have to know about it. The less everyone knows about it the better, I answered strictly before I left to walk towards dad’s room.
I knew I would hear about this later. First of all, Inaila was a woman. They had a bad habit to gossip with each others. And these things belonged actually only to king, not to his family.
Finally I found dad from his office with his advisors going through some papers. Usually I didn’t come to his office if it wasn’t really must. That’s why dad stopped immediately when I stepped in and sent his advisors away. I sat down in front of him on the other side of the table.
- Tell me, he asked straight away.
- I don’t know if this is serious or not but I thought I should tell no matter what, I started.
Dad looked at me still waiting I would start my story.
- I was already coming back home when I saw two people walking towards the city. I have never seen any human so close this place than those two were, I explained.
- Where were they exactly? dad asked.
- You know there is that big pine where I once tried to climb to. And there’s the big stone which looks like a bear if you look at it from right point of view, I explained. – I saw them near there.
- Yes, I know what you mean. Did you send them away? he asked.
- Yes of course! I didn’t want to risk anything so I followed them until I was sure they wouldn’t turn back, I said.
- Alright, that’s good. You did right when you told about this. Actually I was just reading messages from other kings. They had had same kind of problems. The lands near the boundary are getting more and more unstable, dad answered. - Just one thing, no a single word about this to anyone!
- Ok. But I guess Inaila is really curious about why I came here. I saw her in the garden when I came back and she saw straight away something had happened, I warned him.
- I’ll talk wit her. Just take care of yourself that she won’t force you to tell it, dad warned before I left.
I had to clean my bow and my arrows still.
I guessed right that Inaila didn’t like that we didn’t tell her what had happened in the forest. She took revenge and followed me all the time and tried to find out what it was about. Obviously even dad’s lecture hadn’t stopped her.
- Do you know what, I started suddenly, you really should get a life you know.
Inaila stared at me surprised.
- And what do you mean with that? she asked silently.
- Shouldn’t you find a man and start a family with him? I said provoking. – You’re concentrating on my things instead of yours so you really should do something.
- And you should take care of your business and leave me alone because you know nothing about my things! Inaila yelled angry and ran away.
- It would be amazing if you could do that too! I shouted after her.
Now that she had got angry with me, I hoped she would leave me alone for a while. I had enough things to do and Inaila didn’t do the situation any easier while following me. But that what I said was pretty much true. She should get an own life. Inaila couldn’t ever be a part of us, me and dad. She could never decide any things related to our land. It was my and dad’s things to do. Dad was waiting when Inaila would find that man she wanted to marry with. Then she would move away from the palace and start a new life. I knew Inaila hated her role. She wanted desperately know everything that happened in the palace. But she wasn’t allowed to know anything that happened in dad’s office behind those closed doors where only I and dad’s advisors could enter in. Inaila was so irritated because she couldn’t take a part of controlling our land. That was dad’s and later my thing to do.
The rest of the week was busy for me. I was hunting in the forest with other men and after that I was so exhausted I couldn’t do anything. Inaila was still mad at me so I could be in peace for a while. But I knew her curiosity would soon win and she would start to pressure me again.
- So, how is it going with men? I asked when I crashed into Inaila next time. It was funny to tease her just because she got angry so easily. She gave a murderous look towards me before she answered.
- That’s not your business. And besides shouldn’t you be doing the same? I mean, you’re supposed to be a king one day. Shouldn’t king have a queen also, right? she asked and a triumphant look appeared to her face.
- But of course, I answered. – Dad isn’t leaving his throne for a long time so I don’t need to hurry. But your biological clock is ticking, you know. I guess you should really hurry up! I grinned. Inaila gave an angry look to me before she left away. Her braid was swinging like a mad from other side to other side. I laughed loudly and walked to my dad’s office.
- I’ve had more news about humans today, he began to tell when I sat down in front of him.
- What kind of news? I asked curious.
I was afraid this would be a big problem soon.
- Many have told about humans who are walking in our forest. I mean that there have been more of them than before. Luckily nobody has seen them so close the city than you did, he explained.
- But what can we do? I asked.
- I don’t know. If they continue that I don’t see any other choice than make more magic walls to the boundary. And that isn’t the best option in my opinion, dad said.
- If we knew more about them… If we could talk with them it would make many things easier, I mumbled deep in my thoughts.
- Atha’n! Don’t even think about that! dad yelled scared.
- What? Do you really think I’m so stupid that I would try to talk with them? Of course not! I wouldn’t risk our land like that!
That was what I thought.
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katjuzka- Number of posts: 475
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tδδhδn tulee koko ajan jδnnemmδksi 
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xxolympiaxx- Moderator

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amazing parts!!!! good job Heli
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aww i feel sorry for Inaila though =/
aww i feel sorry for Inaila though =/

Heli- Number of posts: 107
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katjuzka έγραψε:tδδhδn tulee koko ajan jδnnemmδksi
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Hah, tylsδδhδn sitδ ois kirjottaakin, jos mitδδn ei tapahtus!
Mutta kiitos ja kumarrus!
Sorry about the Finnish...
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Thanks Oly!
Ahmwell...The parts will change soon...

Marjolein- Number of posts: 1125
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Ha! Haha!
But your biological clock is ticking, you know. I guess you should really hurry up!xD
Thanks Heli (:
Thanks Heli (:
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I don't like the main character, sorry he's just too proud of himself pffff...
I think his sis will be better xD
I think his sis will be better xD
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