Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~

Heli: Number of posts: 107
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Talking about ~The Summer of Changes~

Δημοσίευση από Heli στό Σαβ Sep 26, 2009 7:36 pm

I thought to start this topic finally, since everybody else has done the same already...
Here are some helping questions if you don't know where to start. Laughing

What do you think about the whole story?
Positive/negative sides?
What do you think about Pete? Why he is teasing Eve so much?
How do you think Eve is going to revenge Pete?
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And I'm also open to any critique about it. I know I'm not a perfect writer so sometimes hearing something negative is also welcome. I've noticed that mainly everybody are saying only the good sides of the story (I know I'm doing that myself too..) but negative sides stay hidden. I guess it's because nobody wants to hurt anybody here..

What a Face

So, feel free to say anything you want!

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Marjolein

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Δημοσίευση από Marjolein στό Σαβ Sep 26, 2009 9:54 pm

The story is truly amazing Heli, don't worry Wink

You've written it in such a way that you're able to inmagine Eve's thoughts, the things she does and why.
I think Pete teases her, coz secretly he has a cruch on him. I also predict Eve will find out and get even to kiss the other guy, Vili or something (My finish sucks, sorry)

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Dimitra

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Δημοσίευση από Dimitra στό Κυρ Sep 27, 2009 10:03 am

Mmmm... the story is really something different, I like the whole concept of the boy-girl she is and how she deals with other's comms about her personal life. I think all of us, in some time of our lives have felt this way... (at least I've been kinda like this, you know, who cares about boys and so on, even though I hate to say I'm not anymore). I like how you let the whole thing out, how you describe the circumstances, although I think I'd like to learn a bit more about Vili's character, he seems to be one of the main characters but we've seen nothing of him yet (here's a kinda negative xD). Mmmm... what else? I think that's all I can think for now... maybe later I'll have more inspiration....xD

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Δημοσίευση από Heli στό Κυρ Sep 27, 2009 11:42 am

Thanks for your opinions! Very Happy

Mar, you're thinking right, some way... Wink

Dimitra, I noticed myself too that I had left Vili to the background even I thought first he would have bigger part of this story. Neutral

I guess I'm concentrating now so much what's going on with Eve and Pete so I had to forget Vili for a while. But I promise he will appear more in the future, I've some bigger plans for him.. Laughing

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When everything fades to gray
we dive into the darkness
some things are needless to say

Sonata Arctica - Everything fades to gray

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Δημοσίευση από Dimitra στό Κυρ Sep 27, 2009 12:09 pm

Cool, that's what I wanted to hear! Can't wait for that!

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