Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..*The end*..

Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..The end..

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Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..The end..

Post by Marjolein on Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:23 pm

I know I have a story going on, and I'm not canceling it either, but I just want to share this pearl of a story with you I know some of you have been reading the beginning on another foro ass well, and some got emotional. please, this is only a fanfic, my imagination, my fantasy. I do not want to offend any of you, and if I do; I'm terrible sorry for that.. I hope you'll enjoy this one (:

Prologue

“Can’t say how I feel, can’t tell if my heart would heal, but I always knew from the start, I never really had your heart. So leave me now before I cry. The pain’s too much to say goodbye. But always remember in each tear I shed, is an ‘I love you’ unsaid.”

Mr. Broken Heart

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Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..The end..

Post by Marjolein on Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:25 pm

Part 1

It was a rainy, cold night. A man was driving home after having a firm chat with his girlfriend. He looked at his left hand. His knuckles were bruised from hitting her on her mouth. He tightened his grip around the steering wheel. His hand grabbed a bottle and brought it to his mouth. ‘That ungrateful piece of..’ And he took a big sip. The bottle of Absinthe he had taken with him when he left the apartment of his girlfriend was full when he grabbed it. Now it was half empty. The man was getting more and more drunk.

‘Yes, I love you too honey. Javi, I really have to hang you. Calling while driving is illegal.’ She smiled and putted her brand new LG Secret back in her shoulder bag. She laid her hand on her belly and felt her little baby kicking. ‘Three months to go..’ She smiled. The radio was tuned on her favorite radio station, and played some old, classic songs. Happy she sang along. Suddenly the headlights of a car shined into her’s. She stopped singing. Her eyes widened and she just stared in front of her. She was waiting for the crash. It took forever according to her, but after the black Corvette crashed into her Chevrolet, it went fast. She hit her head against the steering wheel. The radio was still playing. ‘-ay with me, will you be my love
among the fields of barley?
We’ll forget the sun in his jealous sky
As we lie in fields of gold
See the west wind move like a lover so
Upon the fields of barley
Feel her body rise as you kiss her mouth
Among the fields of gold..’ was all Sting sang before shutting up.

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Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..The end..

Post by Marjolein on Sun Jul 12, 2009 10:49 am

Part 2

Javi, Basty and Mikel were watching movies at Mikel’s house. Like always when they had a movie-night at Mikel’s place, they were watching horror movies. ‘Why is Ony not here? He’s missing the popcorn..’ Mikel said while grabbing some of it and putting it in his mouth. ‘I don’t know.. I thought that he had to work tonight or something..’ Javi answered. ‘No, he had to talk with his girlfriend. He found out that Serena had cheated on him with one of his colleagues.’ ‘Ouch..’ Javi and Mikel said as one. ‘Yeah, you can say that again.. I hope he won’t do anything stupid..’ Basty said and sipped from his bottle of Cola. They kept quiet and watched the movie.

It was just getting scary when Javi’s phone rang. He jumped up and screamed. Mikel and Basty began to laugh. Mikel was rolling over the ground from laughing and had tears in his eyes. Also Basty had to wipe some tears from laughing away. ‘O ha ha! Very funny guys.. I’m laughing my ass off, NOT! Huh?’ ‘What’s wrong mate?’ Basty asked. ‘Nothing, nothing.. I only don’t know this number..’ And he answered his phone. ‘Javi Álvarez speaking.. Yes, that’s my wife.. Yes, Sophia.. What’s wrong with her? And sorry if it’s rude, but who are you?’ Javi’s eyes widened. Mikel sat back on the couch and looked at his friend. His eyes went to Basty who shrugged. ‘Wha-what? O my.. I’m on my way..’ While hanging up he walked into the hall way. He putted his jacket on and wanted to go out of the door. ‘Ermm.. Javi? I don’t know, but wouldn’t it be a lot easier if you putted your shoes on?’ Mikel said. Javi turned around, looked at him, looked at his feet and ran back into the livingroom. ‘Damn, damn, damn!’ Impatient he began to put his sneakers on. It was silent in the room except a few cursing words from Javi every now and then. ‘Okay, enough! What the hell is going on?’ Mikel asked his friend. Javi finished his shoe and jumped up. ‘Sophia! I have to go now!’ ‘You’re not going anywhere without us. Especially not now.’ Basty decided and he got up. He and Mikel putted their jacket on and walked to Mikel’s car. ‘Address?’ ‘What?’ ‘Address! I’m not gonna let you drive in my beautiful BMW M3 with cruise control..’ And Mikel rubbed his cheek against the roof of the car. Basty rolled with his eyes. Javi didn’t had time to waste time and gave the address. They got into the car and Mikel drove away. ‘Calle Doctor Esquerdo 46.. Wait! That’s.. That’s the hospital!’ Mikel looked at Javi. ‘Mikel! Pay attention to the road! Darn it!’ Basty muttered from the backseat. Quick Mikel focused on the road. ‘Javi? What happened? Who called you?’ Javi only stared out of the window and didn’t said a thing. Basty laid his hand on Javi’s shoulder. During the ride they were quiet. Even the radio wasn’t playing. Soon they arrived at the hospital. Javi didn’t wait until the car stood still and opened the door. He jumped out of the car and ran into the hospital. Mikel parked it and also he and Basty ran inside. Javi was standing in the doorway, behind a closed door staring through the glass. Mikel and Basty came standing next to him, each at one side of Javi. A woman was lying on her side while doctors were helping her. Javi could see a tattoo on her back, on her lower back. It was a butterfly. ‘This can’t be true.. This isn’t happening.. No.. No.. No! NO!’ Javi slammed with his fist against the window. That hair, that tattoo, those curves.. This couldn’t be true.. A lonely tear rolled over his cheek, followed by more. Basty laid his arm around the shocking shoulders of his friend. Mikel lent against the wall and stared in front of him. The doors opened and one of the doctors walked outside. Javi looked up and saw that it was wrong. ‘NOOOO! Sophia! Why.. Why, why, why… God damn it why!’ The doctor let him walk inside. Javi took the hand of his wife. ‘She’s still alive, but we won’t help her.. It’s useless. Not to be harsh but she’ll die anyway; even if we would help her..’ ‘J.. av.. i.. My baby.. Our baby..’ Javi laid his finger against her lips. ‘Sshh.. Don’t speak my love.. Just open your eyes and look at me.. I wanna see your gorgeous blue eyes, blue as the morning sky..’ Javi smiled sadly and Sophia opened her eyes. She looked at him. ‘I.. lo-ove you.. J.. av.. ii..’ She said. Her nose had been bleeding. Javi pressed his lips against her’s and tasted them for the last time. He felt how she kissed him back and how her lips became tense. Her look became more hollow. She let go of her breath. Javi was still holding her hand, it was limp. He let go of it and gave her one last kiss on her forehead. Then he turned and walked out of the room. Mikel laid his hand on Javi’s shoulder. Javi looked up at his friend and walked away. ‘What happened with her?’ Basty asked. ‘She was in a car accident. A black Corvette drove into her car. The driver was drunk. He’s here too. Maybe you wanna let your friend see him?’ The doctor said and told them the room of the driver. ‘Better to let Javi sit here.. He will get very angry if he sees the person who did this..’ Basty said when Mikel wanted to call Javi. Mikel shut his mouth and nodded. They walked to the room and looked through the window. A blonde man from 1.78 meters tall was lying in bed. He had a bandage around his ribs and a plaster on his head. ‘What the hell? ONY?!’ Mikel and Basty said as one and looked shocked at each other.

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Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..The end..

Post by xxolympiaxx on Mon Jul 13, 2009 10:13 pm

i have read this one before and it's so sad..=S but it seems such an amazing story! please continue!

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Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..The end..

Post by Marjolein on Tue Jul 14, 2009 9:44 am

Thanks Oli (:

Part 3

‘We have to tell Javi this..’ And Mikel walked back. ‘Mikel! No! Ugh.. Will he ever listen to me?’ And Basty stayed at Ony’s room. Not much later Mikel came back with Javi. ‘Mate, we have good and bad news for you..’ ‘MIKEL!’ Basty looked angry at his mate. ‘Sorry, sorry.. Well, the good news is: we know where Ony is.. But the bad news is that he’s behind that door..’ ‘What happened to Ony then?’ Javi didn’t got a thing of this. He looked through the window. ‘Ehmm.. He was in a car accident..’ Basty was still looking angry at Mikel, who didn’t cared about Basty’s look. Ony opened his eyes and looked through the window, back at his friends. He looked surprised. The guys walked inside. ‘Heya guys!’ He said and tried to smile. ‘Well, hello! What happened with you?’ ‘I can’t remember much of it, and I don’t even want coz my head is killing me, but I was in a car accident..’ Mikel sat down on a chair. ‘Dude, you are smelly.. Do I smell.. Absinthe? You were DRUNK while driving?!’ Mikel stared at his friend. ‘Mikel, do you really have to yell like that? My head’s killing me anyway..’ ‘Sorry..’ Mikel lowered his eyes. Suddenly he got up. ‘I’m gonna get some coffee.. Later!’ And he walked out of the room. Javi sat down on the other chair in the room. ‘You were in a car accident? Funny.. Sophia was too..’ His voice died away and a sad look came in his eyes. ‘Well, not that funny coz she didn’t made it.. She’s dead, our child’s dead.. A piece of me is dead..’ Ony laid his hand on Javi’s. ‘I’m sorry to hear mate..’ The door opened and a doctor walked inside. The same one who had tried to save Sophia. He recognized Javi. ‘Hello sir. I didn’t knew that you three knew him.. He is the man-..’ Basty made a gesture to let him shut up, but the man didn’t saw it. ‘-who drove into your wife’s car..’ Javi shook Ony’s hand of his’ and jumped up from the chair. ‘You? You are the moron who killed my wife? Who killed my baby? You?’ Tears were standing in his eyes. Ony looked shocked from the doctor to Javi. ‘I.. I killed someone? O my God.. I killed-..’ A tear rolled over his cheek. ‘O boy..’ Basty thought. ‘I hate you! I hate you Ony! You killed my wife! You killed her! How-..!’ He began to cry and ran out of the room, outside the building. He ran into the pouring rain, not even noticing that it was raining. In no time his clothes were soaked. While crying he fell on his knees.

Mikel walked down the hall with a mug coffee in his hand. He whistled a tune and walked back to Ony’s room. He saw Javi rushing by. He lent backward so he could just look around the corner. He turned back and looked asking at Basty. He just shook sadly his head. Mikel turned his head to Ony. Ony had a hollow look in his eyes and stared in front of him. ‘And who’s gonna explain what happened here for fucks sake?’ Mikel said impatient. ‘Mikel.. Don’t..’ Basty looked at his feet. Mikel lent against the door-post and drank his coffee. ‘Well?’ ‘He.. He knows..’ Basty answered Mikel, still looking at his feet. ‘Right, he knows.. Who knows what?’ Mikel asked, a tad friendlier. ‘Javi.. He knows..’ Mikel almost dropped the plastic mug. ‘O-oh..’ Also he lowered his eyes.

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Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..The end..

Post by Marjolein on Fri Jul 31, 2009 5:30 pm

Part 4

It was still raining when a thunderstorm began. Javi was still outside, kneeling on the ground. Tears were floating over his cheeks but he wasn’t crying anymore. He was full of grief, and angry. Mostly angry. ‘How could he do this to me..? After everything we’ve been through? How could You take my girl away from me? My baby?’ He looked up to the sky. ‘You never saved me, why don’t You just take my life like You took the life of my wife and my unborn baby? Well?!’ A lighting striked through the dark blue sky. Javi got up and began to walk. He didn’t want to be in the same room as Ony right now. Not much later he came home and locked the frontdoor when he was inside. It was empty and quiet. The silence was killing him. Never the sound of Sophia talking on the phone, never the smell of her hair or her perfume, never her voice singing while cooking, never her delicious paella again.. A nagging pain was burning behind his eyes. He had to take care of so many things now: The funeral, call her family.. Javi couldn’t think clearly anymore. All he wanted is to be with his wife. He would give everything to see her again. He just grabbed a bottle out of the cupboard and walked into the kitchen. He opened a cabin and grabbed a bottle with some pills. ‘If He won’t take my life, I’ll just do it myself..’ And he walked into the livingroom. Javi sat down on the couch. Next to him, on a table stood a picture of him together with Sophia. It was a photo of their wedding. He looked at the bottle in his hand. ‘Ibiproven.. She had to take it for her backaches.. Why is everything reminding me of her?’ He twisted the lid of it and scattered some of the pills on his hand. With a mouth full of pills he opened the bottle of whisky. He closed his eyes and brought the bottle to his lips.

‘Yeah.. O-oh.. What will Javi do now?’ Basty asked no one in particular. Mikel shrugged and Ony wasn’t reacting at all. He had his own problem. ‘How could I’ve been so stupid.. I.. I killed Sophia coz I was angry at Serena.. and grabbed a bottle and now..? Now Javi will probably never talk with me ever again, I go to jail coz I killed someone and was driving while drinking.. And the woman from whom I thought that she loved me cheated on me with one of my colleagues. Can this day get even worse?’ A nurse walked inside. ‘Mr. Martos? I’ll give you something to sleep. That’s very important now.’ Ony muttered a bit, but eventually he admitted and fell asleep after taking the pills. Mikel and Basty left his room and stood in the central hall now. ‘Where’s Javi?’ ‘He ran outside.. I saw him when I came back with the coffee.’ Mikel answered. They walked outside. There was no sign of Javi. ‘Drop me at Javi’s house, will you?’ Mikel nodded and they walked to his car. Quick Mikel drove to Javi’s house. While Basty checked out about their friend he stayed in the car and turned the radio on.

Basty rang the doorbell. ‘Javi! Open up mate!’ No reaction. Basty was getting worried. ‘Mikel! Get your ass over here!’ he shouted back before kicking the door in. ‘I have a key, dude..’ Mikel said and showed it. ‘Couldn’t wait, sorry.. C’mon!’ And Basty ran inside. Mikel followed him, muttering that Basty could pay a new door. They reached the livingroom. Javi was lying half on the ground, half on the couch. A bottle of pills and a bottle whisky were lying closely to him. ‘Shit! Mikel, call an ambulance! NOW!’ Basty checked on Javi while Mikel called and waited for the ambulance to arrive. ‘Stay with us mate. You can’t give up now. Javi, come back to Earth dude.’ Basty slapped him in his face to wake him up. Not much later the paramethics arrived. ‘He still has a weak pulse..’ Basty and Mikel made some space for the guys. Soon the ambulance left with Javi. ‘Back to the hospital?’ Mikel suggested. ‘Yes..’ Basty said and sighed. For the second time that night they drove to the hospital, again in silence.

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Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..The end..

Post by Dimitra on Sat Aug 01, 2009 6:51 pm

I remember that! I had that stupid idea that I couldn't read it..... well... actually it did make me kinda sad when I was mad about Ony... I think I'll read it this time!!! Very Happy

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Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..The end..

Post by Marjolein on Sat Aug 01, 2009 7:24 pm

I'm glad to hear that Dimi (: And it wasn't stupid at all Wink

I understood it

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Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..The end..

Post by Marjolein on Sat Aug 01, 2009 8:50 pm

Part 5

Three months passed by and Javi didn’t changed back into the happy man he was before. Ony could not forgive himself, he had made such a big mistake. Javi eventually could forgive Ony for it. Soon it was the day of Sophia’s funeral. They were all standing around her grave. The coffin was about to go into the ground. A small band from two persons big was playing. One played guitar, the other sang. Javi felt a tear rolling over his cheek. They were playing Sophia’s favorite song: Mientes tambien by Sin Bandera. Javi sang softly the words of one of their own songs, Siempre serás. It fitted perfectly with this happening. Basty, Mikel and Ony sang along with him. The coffin went into the ground and Javi laid a dark red, almost black rose on it before walking away. Ony walked next to Javi, and Basty and Mikel closed the short line. Not much later all the four men were sitting in the local bar. ‘Ehmm.. Guys? I.. I need ehh.. I need to say something.. It is quite important..’ Ony said and looked at his cola bottle. Javi brought his one to his lips. Ony sighed and began to talk, still looking at his bottle. ‘Javi forgave me for driving into Sophia’s car, but I still can’t forgive myself for being so stupid.. And I think it would be at least the best for me if I would quit.. And I got an offer for a musical.. It’s not that I hate you three, but it would be better for me..’ Mikel who just took a sip, dropped his bottle. ‘Aah, crap! My cola! And: Whaatta..? Are you serious?’ Ony nodded, not daring to look at his friends. ‘I get it, but still.. It will be weird without you..’ Basty said. Ony nodded. ‘I won’t forget about you, and we still can meet each other as often as we can..’ Javi said. Ony nodded for the third time.
‘Can I get a new cola?’ Mikel asked while looking at the leftovers from his first bottle. A waiter came and gave Mikel a new one. ‘When will you leave us than?’ Basty asked. ‘I have tell the producer my choice first and Marco of course..’ ‘And what about Serena?’ Mikel asked. ‘We made up.. Don’t know how I could forgive her for cheating on me with Ramón, but I did.. I guess..’ ‘Well, that’s good news.’ Basty said and smiled. So did Ony.

The decision was made and everything was settled: Ony would quit with D’Nash, and play in a musical. Javi, Basty and Mikel just continued with the band even though it was hard. Their last concert was emotional. Fans were crying, and so were the boys. Some of the fans did not understand Ony’s choice. If they would know why he made that decision, they would.. But Javi nor Ony told them about the accident.

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Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..The end..

Post by xxolympiaxx on Sun Aug 02, 2009 12:08 am

awwww that's so sad... and i'm glad that this didn't happen in reality!

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Post by Marjolein on Sun Aug 02, 2009 11:10 am

So do I Oli Wink

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Re: Starts with goodbye ~Part 22 ..The end..

Post by Marjolein on Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:07 pm

Part 6

It was a half year later. One of their friends was having his birthday party. It was a fancy one, and they had to go dressed up.
‘I hate it to wear a suit..’ Mikel complained. He was struggling with his tie. Basty walked to him and helped. ‘Less complaining Mikel..’ Mikel sighed and rolled his eyes. Not much later the doorbell rang. Javi went to open up. Two women stood in front of him, dressed in evening gowns. ‘Can I help you?’ The woman who was wearing a black strapless dress opened her mouth. ‘My name is Lucie, I am Basty’s girlfriend..’ Javi shook her hand. She had friendly blue-green eyes and brown, straight hair. The other woman wore a dark red, almost black halter dress. ‘And my name is Isolde, Mikel’s girlfriend. You must be Javi, am I right?’ She shook Javi’s hand and he nodded. Isolde had brown, curly hair and brown eyes. ‘Yes, I am. Nice to meet you two. Why don’t you come inside? It’s December after all.’ And he opened the door further. ‘Mikel! Basty! There is someone for you so hurry up!’ He yelled upstairs. The guys ran downstairs. Their faces lit up by seeing the women. ‘Hey!’ Mikel said and walked to Isolde. She smiled. Also Basty walked to his girl. Not much later they left to the party.

Javi was sitting at the bar, playing with the glass in front of him. A woman walked to the bar and sat down next to him. ‘Red wine, please.’ Javi looked next to him. The woman had fierce red hair, her lips perfectly red chipped. She had dark brown eyes. In them shined something what seduced him, attracted him to her. Quick he drank his tequila. ‘Shall we dance?’ He smiled friendly to the woman. She smiled back. ‘Sure.’ Her voice was warm and friendly. Javi took her hand and they walked to the dance floor. Also Basty and Mikel were dancing. Javi laid his arms around her waist and pulled her closer. She swapped her arms around his neck. ‘What’s your name?’ ‘Julie, your’s?’ ‘My name’s Javi, nice to meet you Julie.’ ‘Agreed.’ They both smiled. Javi felt how Julie laid her head against his shoulder. ‘I saw that you used to wear a ring.. Are you married?’ She raised her head and looked at him. ‘I used to yeah.. My wife died nine months ago.. And with her my unborn baby.. Car accident..’ ‘I’m sorry to hear Javi.. My husband died a year ago.. He was a pilot and flew in a F16, for the Air force.. He crashed with his plane, nobody knows how it could happen..’ She looked down to their feet. Javi lifted her head up with his finger. ‘Hey, don’t be so sad.. This is a party after all.’ He smiled. His words cheered her up and a smile appeared on her face. ‘You’re right: It is David’s birthday party after all.’ The DJ began to play another song: Carrie Underwood – Lessons learned.

It was getting later and later, and also more cozy. Julie and Javi had both quite some alcohol and were tipsy. A quite hot song was playing, and with that their dance moves. ‘Can’t we leave?’ Julie asked. In her eyes shined desire. Javi smiled. ‘And why do you wanna leave?’ ‘O, c’mon! Do you serious think I didn’t noticed how badly you want me?’ She let her hand slide down over his back. Javi laughed softly. Julie took his hand and pulled him with her outside, to her car. She pushed him in it and not much later they took off to her apartment. They got out of her car and walked to the frontdoor. Julie unlocked it, and with that a fire ignited.

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