http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t1.htm Here is a place to discuss about the stories you've ever read in the forum, you can say anything about anything. Sat, 26 Sep 2009 18:36:28 GMT 10 http://i84.servimg.com/u/f84/11/84/65/45/untitl16.jpg http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t1.htm http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t89.htm Heli I thought to start this topic finally, since everybody else has done the same already... Here are some helping questions if you don't know where to start. What do you think about the whole story? Positive/negative sides? What do you think about Pete? Why he is teasing Eve so much? How do you think Eve is going to revenge Pete? ... And I'm also open to any critique about it. I know I'm not a perfect writer so sometimes hearing something negative is also welcome. I've noticed ... Stories Talk Sat, 26 Sep 2009 18:36:28 GMT http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t89.htm#3561 http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t89.htm http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t84.htm Hen . Im open for critics ]]> Stories Talk Fri, 04 Sep 2009 19:38:55 GMT http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t84.htm#3162 http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t84.htm http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t83.htm Marjolein


How do you think Alex and Nicole look like? Would you have given them a different look, if yes, why? I'm curious, so telle me ]]> Stories Talk Fri, 04 Sep 2009 18:58:01 GMT http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t83.htm#3140 http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t83.htm http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t86.htm xxolympiaxx Feel free to write whatever you want about my story, things that you didn't like, things that you liked, any suggestions, and of course how you pictured my fictional characters! i'm not gonna be offended i promise i found a cover for my story, check it out =P Stories Talk Fri, 04 Sep 2009 22:47:12 GMT http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t86.htm#3174 http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t86.htm http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t85.htm Dimitra ]]> Stories Talk Fri, 04 Sep 2009 19:52:11 GMT http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t85.htm#3165 http://yourstories.heavenforum.com/forum-f13/topic-t85.htm