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by Kings, Mysticisms and Betrayals
Four friends will pass many tests in their lives. Their friendship will be tested, and they will risk loosing their lives. All of these because of their job. No, they are not FBI secret agents, basically at that times they didn’t even know that a thing like that will exist in the future. I talk about the times of great Kings and Queens, mysticisms and betrayals. At the time when normal people lived in small cottages and they were lovable whereas the rich lived in huge manors, castles and palaces, with lots of servants and the only thing they knew to do was to try to get more money, more power. Esteban, Antonio, Javier and Michael don’t know what will follow in their lives. Basically that’s something that even I myself don’t know. I just hope to have a good mood when I write so that I won’t write anything bad. So, back to the story, we are in Madrid, a Madrid different from the one we see today, Madrid of 1817.
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Kings, Mysticisms and Betrayals Postponed
Dimitra- Administrator
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Oeh, oeh, oeh! 
Me likes it
MΑS
Me likes it
MΑS
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Dimitra- Administrator
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Really??? Thanks!!!
More tomorrow if I find time, I haven't written many parts and I need time to make some more
PS No t-word punishments here
Thanks!!!More tomorrow if I find time, I haven't written many parts and I need time to make some more
PS No t-word punishments here
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Oky-doky (:
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niceeeeee!!!!
i want more!! sounds interesting! go on dimitroula!!
i want more!! sounds interesting! go on dimitroula!!
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Marjolein- Number of posts: 1126
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Dimitra wrote:Really???
More tomorrow if I find time, I haven't written many parts and I need time to make some more
PS No t-word punishments here
Thank God!
I hate those punishments! 
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Dimitra- Administrator
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Haha, me too!!!
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Woow sis it's AMAZING and I want more
P.S I liked those t-word punishments because I had only one
I liked to punish you or Marjolein
P.S I liked those t-word punishments because I had only one
I liked to punish you or Marjolein
Marjolein- Number of posts: 1126
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well, Marjolein didn't at all
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Dimitra- Administrator
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Yeah, but I had amny punishments so I don't like it, neither does myself nor me!!!! Sooo.... no punishments at least for now
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Part 1
Once upon a time, in the old and now forgotten neighborhoods of Madrid that in the old times were full of life and laughter, four friends were living. Friends since they were born meaning for 20 years already, friends “Today, tomorrow and forever” as they used to say. They were children of poor families whose money was enough only for the absolutely necessary stuff. It was the day that because of what will be said, their whole lives will change forever.
“Michael, please come in to help your father carry the wood to the fireplace” said Michael’s mother from the window when she saw her son coming near with his friends.
“I’m coming mother” he said and after saying goodbye to his friends he run into the house.
“Father, please, leave that to me” he said and took the woods from his father arms before he could even say anything and left them near the fireplace.
As soon as they finished their mother asked him and his sister to come to eat. When they sat on the table sadness came through Michael, always the same and the same soup every day, which you couldn’t even say it was soup, “a plate with water and salt” as his sister Maria used to call it.
“Father, me and the boys thought of something today while we were out”
“I’m listening son, I hope it won’t be a hotheadedness like the other time”
“No father, we decided to go and work to the palace”
Michael’s mother almost choked herself when she heard it.
“You mean soldiers?” Maria asked.
“Yes and no. We heard the sender of the King announcing to the plaza that the King himself is searching for a private guard after last week’s attack by “The Black Men” and after thinking about it we decided to go and see what is going on”
“Michael Hennet Sotomayor, what are you going to do is something very difficult, you must be very responsible to do it” Michael’s mother said.
“But mother, I AM responsible” Michael said while going to the sink with his plate on the hands.
“Ok, I’m going to trust you and let you go, but be aware of the difficulty and that you are alone in this” his father said.
“Thank you father” Michael said and went outside.
“Where are you going again?” his sister asked.
“My little and innocent sister, it’s now or never, I’m going to pick the others up and go to the palace” he said and closed the door behind him.
Once upon a time, in the old and now forgotten neighborhoods of Madrid that in the old times were full of life and laughter, four friends were living. Friends since they were born meaning for 20 years already, friends “Today, tomorrow and forever” as they used to say. They were children of poor families whose money was enough only for the absolutely necessary stuff. It was the day that because of what will be said, their whole lives will change forever.
“Michael, please come in to help your father carry the wood to the fireplace” said Michael’s mother from the window when she saw her son coming near with his friends.
“I’m coming mother” he said and after saying goodbye to his friends he run into the house.
“Father, please, leave that to me” he said and took the woods from his father arms before he could even say anything and left them near the fireplace.
As soon as they finished their mother asked him and his sister to come to eat. When they sat on the table sadness came through Michael, always the same and the same soup every day, which you couldn’t even say it was soup, “a plate with water and salt” as his sister Maria used to call it.
“Father, me and the boys thought of something today while we were out”
“I’m listening son, I hope it won’t be a hotheadedness like the other time”
“No father, we decided to go and work to the palace”
Michael’s mother almost choked herself when she heard it.
“You mean soldiers?” Maria asked.
“Yes and no. We heard the sender of the King announcing to the plaza that the King himself is searching for a private guard after last week’s attack by “The Black Men” and after thinking about it we decided to go and see what is going on”
“Michael Hennet Sotomayor, what are you going to do is something very difficult, you must be very responsible to do it” Michael’s mother said.
“But mother, I AM responsible” Michael said while going to the sink with his plate on the hands.
“Ok, I’m going to trust you and let you go, but be aware of the difficulty and that you are alone in this” his father said.
“Thank you father” Michael said and went outside.
“Where are you going again?” his sister asked.
“My little and innocent sister, it’s now or never, I’m going to pick the others up and go to the palace” he said and closed the door behind him.
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And then? What will happen next?
What will happen next? _________________
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laura- Moderator
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Wow it's so interesting....you stopped in wrong place and I want more
Dimitra- Administrator
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More in a while, I have to translate it, but I promise I'll post today!!!
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