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katjuzka

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Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Thu Apr 30, 2009 6:57 pm

Okey here we go again Razz
New story from Mar and me. We wrote this same way like that other story...
We hope that you like this...

Part 1

it was dark night and two girls broke into one house
quietly they walked around
they found some money and jewelry
quickly they sneeked back out
but they didn't see owner of the house
eldest girl: Crap.. he's home
katja: oh fuck...what we do now?
mar: Yeah, o duh.. run
katja nodded and they started to run but then katja fell against of big window
katja: Auw!
she looked at her leg
mar didn't noticed it at all
katja stood up and tried to walk
it was hard
but she tried to run and she didn't give up
soon she saw a small cottage
katja: mar wait...
butmar couldn't hear her
katja: mar!!!
she turnedaround
katja: i can't run or even walk with this my leg
mar sighed and walked back
katja: but there are some cottage so i could go there...and you could get me later
mar: sure..
katja: thanks
mar ranaway
but first she helped katja to the cottage. meanwhile police came because owner the house called to them
mar: crap
they didn't saw mar and she went away
she wasworried about katja
police: they went to this way and other girl is bleeding
katja got as far as she could into the cottage
police: mikel let's search that bleeding one
Mikel: Sure.. we won't catch the other one now anyway
basty: yeah it's true
they walked away from the house
basty: she really are bleeding...look those blood trace
mikel: Ugh.. Well, we won't haveto clean up
basty just nodded and they started to follow trace
soon they arrived at the cottage
basty: hmmm nice cottage
mikel: Look einstein, our trail leads here
basty: yeah
they got insides, guns aiming into the emptyness
katja heard them and she were quiet
she hoped they wouldn't see her
but then mikel saw her
Mikel: Look who we have here
katja looked at him but didn't say anything
Mikel: Huh, guess she's shy or something
mikel: basty come here
basty walked to him
mikel: i found her
basty: amazing
katja just looked at her leg and tried to stop bleeding
Mikel: We'll take care of it
basty: maybe we should take her to hospital first
Mikel: that was my idea
basty nodded
they helped her up
katja: don't touch me!
she yanked her arm free
she tried to walk but she fell down
katja: god darn it
basty grabbed her and carried her to their car
she sat down on the backseat
basty and mikel sat on the front seat

Last edited by katjuzka on Sat Aug 29, 2009 12:20 pm; edited 30 times in total


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by Marjolein on Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:04 pm

Hehe Razz 'mama mia, here we go again! Mama, how can I resist you' sorry


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by laura on Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:08 pm

It sounds so interesting girls. More? Rolling Eyes

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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by Marjolein on Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:13 pm

Ask my boss, katja Cool


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:33 pm

A bit later you will get more


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:43 pm

Part 2

quickly they drove to the hospital
basty carried her to inside
adoc was waiting
they went to room and doctor looked at katja's leg
katja was impatient
basty and mikel were whole time next to her
Mikel lent against the wall
katja: *oh fuck...he can't be that guy*
she looked weirdly at him
katja: oh fuck...fuck fuck *close her eyes*
Mikel: What?
katja: nothing
Mikel; right..
katja: well i have 3 years old child...and your friend is his father...
basty: pardon?
katja: you have 3 years old son
basty: ok?
katja: he looks just like you
basty thought deeply
katja looked at him
basty: I don'tremember you..
katja: it was just one night thing...almost 4 years ago...
basty: Wait..
katja: yes i wait
basty thoughtagain: wait.. I know you now yeah..
katja: you know?
basty: yup.. themartini-girl
katja: oh yeah...my favourite drink *smile*
basty smiled as well
katja: he have your smile
Mikel: He must look sort of cute then
katja: yes he is so cute
she smiledproud liek a real mum
katja: he's everything to me
Basty: i can imagine
katja: yeah
she smiled a crooked smile
doctor put gypsum to her leg and gave to her crutch
katja: great..
basty: mikel wait with her here so i get the car near of the doors
Mikel: yup
basty left and katja start to make a plan
If she could only liberate her arm from Mikel's iron grip..
katja: that hurts...
Mikel: Sorry
katja: can you let go...i'm not going anywhere
Mikel looked suspecting at her, but let go of her arm
katja: thank you
she rubbed over the soar spot on her arm
then she smiled and took her crutch and hit mikel quite hardly on his head
he groaned and fell on teh floor
katja left as fast as she could to the doors
Mikel was unconsious
doctors went to mikel
they laid him on a bed
then basty came
basty: what the hell happened?
doctor: it look like that someone hit him on his head
Mikel: that stupid bitch
basty: tell me everything
Mikel told what had happened
basty nodded: where she is now?
Mikel: Out.. somewhere
basty: damn it
Mikel: Probably looking for her partner.. try teh cottage
basty: okey i will...can you come or should you stay here?
Mikel: Ask the doc who will stitch me up
basty: doc...can he leave from here?
doc: not yet.. The blow was pretty hard, so he might have a concussion
basty nodded
basty: I'll come to visit later


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by Marjolein on Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:47 pm

muahahaha Twisted Evil

Sorry,, weird mood tonight


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:48 pm

It's ok Mar Razz


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by Marjolein on Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:49 pm

You know me; I'm loco Cool and I like it, ha


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:54 pm

And don't ever change Razz


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by Marjolein on Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:57 pm

Of course not! Why would I? Razz


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:59 pm

Yeah Very Happy:D


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by xxolympiaxx on Thu Apr 30, 2009 9:27 pm

hahahaha i like this story!!
go on chicas!!! Very Happy


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Thu Apr 30, 2009 9:40 pm

Thank you Very Happy


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Fri May 01, 2009 9:51 am

Part 3

then he went to out but he didn't see their car
basty: hail that woman.. hail her.. dude, my car!
one boy: sir...i saw one girl with the crutch taking a police car
basty: She stole my car!
boy: she drove away very fast...and almost drove over one old lady...
basty shook his head: is the lady ok?
boy: yes she is...
basty: good
basty went back to mikel
Mikel: Back already?
basty: she stole our car
Mikel: No
basty: yes
Mikel: No way! Our nice Impala?
basty: yes yes
Mikel: Bitch..
basty: yeah...bitch
they were quiet for a while
meanwhile katja drove to her and mar's home
her leg was hurting, but she didn't care
katja: aah...finally home
she stumled back to the house
katja: heyyy mar...i'm back
mar: finally
katja: police catched me and they got me into hospital
mar: well, I'm glad you're home now
katja: yeah me too...other police went to get car near the doors and other stayed with me...so i hit him on my crutch and then i stole their car
Mar: haha!
katja: car is there outside
mar: is it any good?
katja: it's good car
mar: As long as it's not a Fiantpanda
katja: go to outside and look
mar gave katja her son and walked outside
she stared at the car
mar: oooo my god!
katja came with her son outside: maybe we should paint that some other colour...and change those number plate
mar: Well, we can make it black.. I think the numberplate of my old opel will fit
katja nodded
mar: i'll check it right away
katja: good
she walkedaround toget the numberplate of her old car
soon she came back
she yanked the old one of teh impala
katja: hahaa we have a car now
mar: Better than that stupid Opel Agila
katja: yeah
mar: good, I'll drive it to the garage tomorrow to let it re-colored
katja nodded
they got back inside
next morning basty and mikel went to practise with javi and ony
Mikel: don't besurprised if I stop all thesudden
ony: dude what happen to you? you have nice bruise
Mikel: his previous one night stand hit me with her crutch
ony: what??
Basty: one of my one night stands hit him in an atempt to take of
ony: why?
Mikel: Cozshe wanted to be free..?
ony nodded
Mikel: Look, she was involved with a robery last night
ony: okey
Mikel: Herpartner was probably waiting so she took of
basty: and she stole our car
Mikel: my beautiful Impala
javi: smart girl
Mikel: I don't like her
javi nodded
Mikel:We won't see that car again
basty: unfortunately
Mikel: You will buy me a new car mate
basty: okey i will buy
Mikel: And do not dare to think about a Fiat or an Opel
basty: i don't
Mikel: good
basty: i'm still a bit shock what she told
ony and javi looked curious
basty: she told that i have 3 years old son
guys:Whaat?
javi: wait..
javi: okey now i understand why one little boy look like you
basty: right
javi: i have seen him on the park sometimes...and he play with my son...
basty: could you take a photo of him?
javi: yes i can
basty: thanks
javi: sometimes he is there with his mom and sometimes with nanny or something...
Mikel: describe them
javi describe them
Mikel: Well, teh mum is the lady who hit me
javi nodded
Mikel: And I think, that the nanny is her partner
javi: okey
Basty: Any ideawhere she lives?
javi: nope
mikel: We'll find out
javi nodded
ony: can we dance now?
basty: yes
ony: awesome
they started to Dance


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