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Marjolein

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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by Marjolein on Fri May 01, 2009 10:08 am

Razz We're baaaaaaaaaaaaaad Laughing


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Fri May 01, 2009 10:10 am

Oh yeah Very HappyRazz


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by xxolympiaxx on Fri May 01, 2009 10:28 am

lol..xD
nice part!Smile


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Fri May 01, 2009 7:01 pm

Part 4

while at the house of Katja
katja: mar i didn't tell you one thing
mar: tellme
katja: i met my son father yesterday
mar: ok..?
katja: he's that other police
mar: the blondeone, right?
katja: yes
mar: nowyousay so.. he looks liek your son
katja: yes he looks like
they looked at the little boy
katja: somehow i don't want that he would meet his father
mar:eventually, he will
katja: yeah
tommy looked up
katja looked at him and smiled
tommy:Mummy? Will youplay with me?
katja: yes of course
she sat down next to him
they started to play
mar looked at them
two days later katja went to park with tommy and javi where there with his son and ony
tommy played with the little copyof Javi
katja looked at them and smiled
javi: isthat your son?
katja: yes
javi: He's cute
katja: yeah he is...also your son is cute
javi: thank you
katja: you're welcome
javi"what's your son's name?
katja: tommy...your?
Javi: Jairo
katja: cute name *smile*
Javi: My wife chose it
katja: she have good taste...how long you have been married?
javi: nearly two years
katja: okey
javi:Areyoumarried?
katja: nope
javi: ok
katja: and i don't have even boyfriend
javi: but.. who's the dad oftommy then?
katja: it was just one night thing
javi nodded
ony looked at her
katja: what?
ony: nothing
soon jairo and tommywalked back
katja: did you have fun sweety? *smile*
tommy nodded
katja: good...
tommy: jairo is a really nice friend mummy
katja: that is great thing *smile*
jairo: And I played nice with you Tommy
tommy: yeah
jairo: do you wanna be my friend?
tommy: yes i wanna be *smile*
jairo smiled as well
katja: awww so cute
javi: agreed
ony: yeah he really look like basty...
javi kicked against hisleg
katja: what??? you know his father?
javi: you stupid cow *whispers*
ony ignored him. Ony: yes
katja: damn it...
she lifted Tommy up: i ahve to go
she left
quickly she got home
she went to livingroom
there she found mar doing the laundry
katja: hey
mar: hey
katja: i met two guys on the park
mar: tell me
katja: they are tommy's fathers friends
mar: no way, blondies friends?
katja: yes
mar: ok


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by Marjolein on Fri May 01, 2009 7:12 pm

awesomeness


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Fri May 01, 2009 8:54 pm

Very Happy:D


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Sat May 02, 2009 3:11 pm

Part 5

meanwhile javi and ony went to basty's place
basty opened teh door
javi: hey
basty: hola
javi: i have some pics for you
he took his phone and showed them
basty: he's cute
ony: he looks like you
basty nodded
they sat down
javi: he were there with his mom
basty: can you describeher?
javi: she had cructhes
basty: Duh
javi: and she left right away when ony said that we know you
ony: sorry
basty nodded
javi: She's not married nor has a bf
basty: okey
javi: i haven't seen the nanny
basty: i like to meet my son
javi: I can imagine
basty: yeah
javi: come with me the next time I go to tha park
basty: okey i come
javinodded
one week later katja and mar went to park with tommy
basty and Javi were there as well
katja: oh fuck
mar: wha? O crap.. Blondie
katja: oh yeah
they walked to another bench
tommy: jairoo *smile*
katja smiled
jairo: tommy come to play with me
tommy: sure
tommy: can i go mom?
katja: Sure honey
tommy went to play with jairo
javi and basty looked at the girls
katja looked back but then she turned her head away
mar: I gotta be honnest.. Blondies friend is cute
katja: yes he is
both girls smiled
katja: i could take him but he's married
mar: Aww... too bad
katja: yeah...
they watched tommy play
also basty looked at tommy and also he looked at katja
basty: my son.. I can't believe it..
javi: he's cute and jairo's friend
basty smiled
javi smiled back
basty: Shall we talk to them?
javi nodded
they got up and walked to the girls
girls looked at them
javi: Look basty, this is tommy's mum and that her nanny, I think..
katja: she's not tommy's nanny...
javi: Sorry..
katja: it's ok
mar: I'm just a friend of her
katja: yeah...we have know each other quite long
mar: Since high school
katja: actually earlier...we have quite same kind of backround
mar: O yeah..
katja: our dad's knew each other
javi nodded
katja: i miss my dad...i haven't meet him for long time
mar: Mine is in the ground..
katja: i don't even know where my dad is
mar: We won't give up searching, remember?
katja: yeah i remember...but maybe it's good that he doesn't come here anymore...
javi: what do you mean?
katja: police would catch him right away...
javi was even more confused now


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by Marjolein on Sat May 02, 2009 4:06 pm

Hah, we confused Basty I need the batman-smily..


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by laura on Sat May 02, 2009 4:27 pm

I like it.More? Rolling Eyes

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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Sat May 02, 2009 6:47 pm

Part 6

basty: don't say that your father is that drug dealer and almost terrorist...
katja: yup..
katja: he's my father...
basty nodded
katja: he saw tommy when he born...
katja: And after that he disappeared
she were quiet
mar: It's not personal honey..
katja: yeah i know that...my bro keep saying that a lot to me
mar: how is he btw?
katja: he's fine
mar: good *smile*
katja: he's getting married soon...they just have to find perfect day and place
mar: That's cool
katja: yeah...i'm so happy for him...well they have to find some safe place what police can't find
mar shrugged: That's what you get eventually
katja: yeah hope so
javi: Right.. Well, I know your name, but what's your name then?
And he looked at mar
mar: i'm mar
javi: Nice to meet you, I'm Javi
mar: nice to meet you too
katja: you have nice name
javi: thank you
katja: you're welcome
basty: And my name is Basty
katja: you have nice name too
mar: So taht's blondies name *smile* Nice to meet you
basty: nice to meet you too...even i should arrest both of you
mar: pardon?
basty: because of that robbery
mar: who says we were part of it? Where the hell are you talking about?
basty: nice try...at least your friend were part of that robbery
mar: then why are you saying you should arrest both of us if you only know she was part in it?
basty: owner the house told that he saw two girls
mar: and who says I amnumber two?
basty: my instinct
mar: well, your instinct stinks
katja: and you are not going to arrest me front of my son
javi: She has a point..
katja: of course i have a point
basty rolled with his eyes
katja: because you are police....do you know ashley?ex-police
basty: She was one of my partners
katja nodded: she's nice girl
basty: How do you know her?
katja: she is my bro's girlfriend
basty: No way
katja: yes
basty: so your borther's name must be Marcus..
katja: yeah
javi: is it ok if we sit down..?
mar: yes it's ok
they sat down
katja: i have 3 brothers
basty: Are they all like Marcus?
katja: oh yeah...how you know marcus?
basty: ashley introduced him
katja: okey...what do you think about marcus?
basty: he's ok, I suppose
katja: also he have done some robberies but not so much than rest of us
bastynodded
suddenly mikel came there
Mikel: hey guys
basty: hey mikel
hesat down
katja: is your head okey?
Mikel: Not thanks to you
katja: yeah but i had to do something
mar: haha, you are the fool she hit?
mikel: yeah that's me
he rubbed his hair and smiled
mar smiled back to him


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by Marjolein on Sat May 02, 2009 6:59 pm

Haha Razz


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Sat May 02, 2009 7:05 pm

Very Happy:D:P


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Sun May 03, 2009 10:30 am

Part 7

'whooooooooooo are you? who who, who who..'
Mar: Sorry, gotta answer it..
mar: yes?
'Hey mar.. Listen. Tonight there will be some party for the richies. I want you two to go to the house of the premier.'
mar: okey
'there you do the usual stuff. ok?'
mar: ok
'good. Bye'
mar: bye
she walked back to the others
katja looked at her
mar: I'll tell later
katja nodded
mar: Something with mum.. it's no big deal *wink*
katja: good to hear that *smile*
Mikel and Javi: riiight
katja: mar maybe we should go to home now
mar: yes.. I still need to do the cooking
katja: yeah it's your turn today....tommyy let's go home
tommy ran to her
tommy: mummy i had fun with jairo
katja: that's good sweety
they left and basty stared after katja
Mikel: Behave piρero
basty: yeah...but she's beautiful girl
the guys rolled their eyes
basty smiled
Mikel: Let's go
basty nodded
they got up and javi went after jairo
meanwhile girls
katja lifted tommy up and putted him in the car
soon they were home
mar: ok, our boss called
katja: okey...what we have to do?
mar: get into the house of the premier
katja nodded
mar: he wont be home
katja: good
mar: let's hope blondie won't come
katja: yeah let's hope
she putted tommy down
later that night they left to do their job
mar: i hope that one day we can quit it..
katja: actually i hope too
mar: when we paid of our dad their depts, we can stop.. finally
katja: yeah...i want better childhood to tommy than i had
mar nodded
they went to inside
the lights were off and they sneaked around
katja: arrggh...i hate these crutches
mar: they're good weapons though *giggles*
katja: oh yeah *smile*
they walked further
soon they were done but then police came there
mar: ugh
katja: damn it
mar: stupid blondie
katja: why always he?
they waited for them to leave
but they didn't leave
mar: they make me nervous
katja: yeah me too
they tried to go around the back
but police notice them
basty was waiting for them
katja: damn it...fuck
basty: My instinct was right
katja: always you
mar: I began to dislike him
katja: me too
katja: you're standing in our way
basty: you think so?
katja: yes
katja: we will go home now
she hit him with her crutch
basty fell down
quick the girls walked away
katja: power of the crutches
mar: hell yes


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by Marjolein on Sun May 03, 2009 1:33 pm

I began to like crutches more now xD


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Re: Crime or Love ~Cancelled??~

Post by katjuzka on Sun May 03, 2009 1:54 pm

Very Happy:D


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